Analysis of My mobile phone



Is my most treasured possession
Given to me two years ago
By my son James for my 49th birthday
With it I can keep in touch with the world
I can text, Listen to music
Search the Net, take a photo
Shoot a short video
Or Connect to WAP whatever it is
Well. I would if I knew how
Which button or mode to use
If only I can read the Menu
So for now it just sits fully charged
Inside my top drawer
Waiting for the day I work up the courage
To actually work my phone


Scheme ABCDEBBFGHIJKLM
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 11110010 10111101 111111111 1111101101 11110110 101101 101100 101111011 1111111 1101111 110111010 111111101 01111 10101111010 1100111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 458
Words 98
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 358
Words per stanza (avg) 98

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The irony about not being mobile savy and you get a smart phone!

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Written on November 23, 2013

Submitted by taminator2016 on December 08, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Kaci Tami

I am an aspiring writer, poet, teller of tales that is me. I have always seen things in a different light and from my perspective, it gives you an insight into what makes me tick as a human being. My life is always hectic and the most important thing I have learnt is that there are three things that one should value in life (a) Your loved ones (b)Your health (c) The memories you create with people. In the end, we all leave this world alone, so spend time creating memories and meaningful relationships with individuals and society at large. My poems reflect my perspective on the world at large both real and imagined. I am in the process of collating an anthology of poems so I can share my likes, dislikes and life with others. Thank you for reading my poems more…

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