Analysis of Super Fish Thorpe



I wish I were like Thorpe
The super fish that has now retired
No longer to challenge the rest of the world
For their swim records
For Thopie has broken them all
I wish I were like Thorpie
With his gargantuan size 17 feet
And his brace of medals
From The Commonwealth to the Olympiads
I wish I were like thorpie
The supermodel
Gracing the catwalks with his own clothing line
And his million-dollar enterprise
I wish I were Thorpie
So I could swim and swim and swim
Instead of always sitting on the sidelines
Of The pool
Waiting for everyone, watching everyone else
Enjoying themselves
For alas I can’t swim!


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 111011 010111101 11011001101 11101 1111011 111011 11010011 011110 1010101 111011 0100 1001111101 01101010 11101 11110101 011110101 101 1011010101 01001 101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 619
Words 115
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 492
Words per stanza (avg) 111

About this poem

This poem is dedicated to Ian Thorpe, one of our best swimmers of all time. He was a great athlete and role model.

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Written on November 23, 2013

Submitted by taminator2016 on December 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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