Analysis of Kimberly



Kiss me under the bed of stars that twinkled in the sky.
Hug me until our bodies produce flames.
Hold me like the galaxy holds all the planets.
Love me harder when my demons obscure my whole existence.

In the midst of my busy day, I’m always daydreaming to be with you,
Your absence just makes my heart monochromatic.
When I think of us being apart, all I feel is sorrow.
Hush! This tragedy is not overdramatic.

My love how can something like this be so real?
A stunning mystery embedded behind those dazzling eyes.
Hidden beneath the immense gaze, there is something surreal.
Drown with thoughts for sometimes, you’re cold as ice.

Broke my walls, unguarded my sanctuary,
Had to compromise but I don’t want this feeling slip away.
Freedom of mind, freedom of soul,
Found myself losing control.

Every broken piece of you is beautiful,
It’s more than just a physical connection which I adore.
Craving to dive the depths of your soul.
Unraveling the cliché, maybe fate just painted us to be together.

Remembering days when my world turned upside down,
Beyond this place of wrath and tears,
You nonchalantly entered the boundary and hold my hand.
You’re doomed coz losing you is now my biggest fear.

Like an avalanche you got my heart so quick.
Full of wonders, is this some kind of a trick?
Being with you makes me vulnerable,
It is you and no one else whom I willingly surrender myself to.

You are my yellow,
You brighten my day and bring a golden glow,
My love, forgive me if I stumble and fall.
I promise to love you today and forevermore.


Scheme AXXX BCDA EXEX XXFF GXFX XXXX CCGB DDXD
Poetic Form
Metre 11100111110001 11011010011 111010011010 111011100111010 0011110111101111 11011110010 111111001111110 11100111 11111011111 0101000100111001 10010011111001 1111011111 1110101100 11101111110101 10111011 111001 100101111100 111101000101101 101101111 010001101110111010 010011111111 01111101 110101001000111 111101111101 1110111111 11101111101 1011111000 11101111110001011 11110 11011010101 11011111001 1101110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,562
Words 316
Sentences 24
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

It is about the girl I love for three years already. She has been with me thru ups and down and I really appreciate her existence in my life.

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Written on December 07, 2022

Submitted by marisoltayko1125 on December 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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