Analysis of more than once you lied

Star Alvarado 2004 (Indiana)



you say you mean it
you say you care
why don't you just leave me alone here
the darkness is my only friend
leave me like the others alone and dead

I can hear the lie in your words
I can hear the lie in your voice
you say you mean it but you don't
you say you care but you lie
you say you love me that can't be right
you say you wouldn't leave me but that's not true

more than once you lied
got me in my feelings when you died


Scheme XXXXX XXXXXX AA
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1111 111111011 01011101 1110100101 11101011 11101011 11111111 1111111 111111111 11110111111 11111 110110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 428
Words 97
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Written on November 10, 2022

Submitted by staralvarado2004 on November 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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