Analysis of This world of ours



Things has started when I am young
My father used to beat-up my mother
My sister and I will always run for our lives
Today here I am tromadused and scared
And my girlfriend beat me up like my father used to do to my mother!
And I am not scared, but I am afraid
Because jail is going to be my second home.

If this is life we choose to live
Our future will be destroyed by our behaviour
And our next generation will eat one another
And our land will be gone for nothing
Because we are the nation of the blood.


Scheme XAXXAXX XAAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11101111 1101111110 110011111101 01111101 01111111101111110 0111111101 011110111101 11111111 101011011101 0101010111010 0101111110 0111010101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 508
Words 107
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 7, 5
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 200
Words per stanza (avg) 52

About this poem

I tried to teach about the things we sow at the past, and today we live with them, but we try to refuses the truth about them.

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Written on October 28, 2022

Submitted by lehlohonolomolete0 on October 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lehlohonolo Jacob Molete

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