Analysis of the red leaf

vidushi 2007 (uttar pradesh)



They say that they love their angels, but I don't
Because my angels left me in a place  unknown.
I tried to feel like home,
But all i could find were broken globes.

They said that they could fly
But i couldn't
And not because my wings were cut
But 'cause all the doors were shut.
I hoped and hoped to find some hope,
But how could I?
When I was chained to that daunting rope.

After few games of my destiny, I found releif
All in a single red leaf.
Because when you have seen the whole forest burn
Even small things can make you dream
But never find yourself lost in them
'Cause dreams aren't something
You can acheive.


Scheme XXXX AXBBCAC DDXXXXD
Poetic Form
Metre 11111110111 011101100101 111111 111110101 111111 1110 01011101 1110101 11011111 1111 111111101 101111100111 1001011 01111101101 10111111 110101101 111010 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 620
Words 131
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 7, 7
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 160
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Written on October 18, 2022

Submitted by vidushi23vidushi on October 18, 2022

Modified on March 30, 2023

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vidushi is a 15 year old girl. She was born in india. She started writing when she was thirteen. She mostly writes sad and heartbroken poetries. She is woking on a novel. more…

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