Analysis of My emotions

aries_tc 2002 (Mizoram)




I dreamed of a world,
Filled with your essence;
Harmonizing the melody and let it furled,
Furled in our memories, delighted by your presence;
Butterflies day and night, from one flower to another,
Like my heart taken by your beauty, from your eyes
all the way to your fragile heart;
Oh! I have fallen, starring into your glamorous soul,
A femme fatale, who plays with my heart;
Yet, as they say “Love is blind”, blinded by your love.
Shallow love, thus far grows far-reaching,
Infinity as I might say, nonetheless even further;
Moon, the belle in our solar system yet unreachable,
Roses, a magnificent symbol of beauty for a commoner;
Northern Star, a treasure for the one’s lost in the seas,
Humans, majestic beings both vulnerable and strong;
Indeed I am, a weakling who intends to catch the impossible,
So I dreamed of a world, where a weakling is not despise;
But loved as he is.
I’ve done it again,
Letting my emotions out in a blank sheets;
I wouldn’t stop unless I attain what I seek,
Now, let me rest, till death finds my way;
Goodnight………………..


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,250
Words 218
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 812
Words per stanza (avg) 187

About this poem

It is an abstract of what I feel for a girl whom i loved so much. Tear drops every time i think about her.

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Written on September 01, 2022

Submitted by thlacheu123 on October 01, 2022

Modified on April 23, 2023

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