Analysis of Lies

Michael Yin 2022 (Kumasi)



We felt warmed by the days
We lighted our faces upon the sun
We spoke out of tales
Evenly I spoke less
You brought the joy out of your lips
Some hopes I felt by your sayings
Secretly they blind folded my core
Some acts that went with truth
I thought matured you were
We played the game
So well and perfectly we played
Until I seek distraction
Blames you will never put upon your shoulders
I keep my words to myself
I seek for no joy these days


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKBLMA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 111101 11010100101 11111 100111 11011111 11111110 100111011 111111 110110 1101 11010011 0111010 11110101110 111111 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 448
Words 94
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 355
Words per stanza (avg) 89

About this poem

Two lovers went side ways when they thought their words would bring no hope. Rather they felt for their lies and suffers the trauma of missing days.

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Written on October 12, 2022

Submitted by michaelhaitstarr on October 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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