Analysis of FREE

Salwa 2007 (Abbotabad)



The secret chit-chats in the corner arouse. Standing in the middle, I was just a loner drowned in thoughts.
The small talks here and there frighten. The brain explodes as the surreal thoughts enrol.
The random stares of the judgmental confuse me as I picture another anxiety attack.
All whilst my heart and brain advance in a decisive fight.
As sweat drips and my hand presses, the curtains of hell undress.
Just a step would escape me from the perplexing lot, better take it before my flesh starts to rot.
As I run away hysterically, thankful, I am , for the mellow friendship of a dear tree.
Boy, nothing better than the feeling of being FREE.


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Poetic Form
Metre 01011001001100010111010101 011101100101100111 0101100100111110010010001 11110101000101 111011100101101 101101110010110110111111 1110110010111010101011 1101010101101
Characters 646
Words 122
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 64
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 512
Words per stanza (avg) 116

About this poem

A short poem about what a person with social anxiety thinks about high school life and the challenges of socialising with other kids.

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Written on October 21, 2022

Submitted by salwamhuss on October 21, 2022

Modified on April 27, 2023

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