Analysis of Common Carnage

Jeffrey Powell 1979 (Pittsburgh, PA)



Biting-Tearing-Scathing
this is not somewhere inviting.
Eviscerating skin and nerves-
effacing and obliterating
sensation;
swift removal of lands and tribes
brings devastation.
No reasoning or rationale,
the freshly arrived just have to go.
Erasing back to barren states;
defacing the
responsive and vibrant.
The unblemished are sunk in despondence.


Scheme AABACDCEFGHIB
Poetic Form
Metre 101010 1111010 1101 01000100 010 10101101 1010 1100101 010011111 01011101 0100 010010 00101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 352
Words 58
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 290
Words per stanza (avg) 49

About this poem

It is probably true that warfare and aggression are written into the human genetic code. Originally intended to describe an individual's personal struggles, this piece quickly expanded to encompass any loss of life through violent acts. Whether from combat, corruption, or clear-cut chaos the tragic ripple effect from man's brutality is unnerving.

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Written on November 20, 2019

Submitted by JokerGem on October 10, 2022

Modified by JokerGem on November 08, 2022

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Jeffrey Powell

A bit of an introvert, Jeffrey enjoys arranging words and dabbling in poetic forms as an outlet for expressing his thoughts, feelings, and observations. He tends to play by his own rules and darts in and out of the civilized world, as avoiding the conventional gathering is more his style. Jeffrey lives with his fraternal twin whom he enjoys sharing a laugh with at the opportune time. more…

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