Analysis of a teenage rant
maybe it’s just me bc i would never
the second i walk in the doors it’s never me
it’s always
you
what’s wrong? why do you look sad? what’d he say? how are you?
maybe it’s my fault
maybe i added to the problem
but i always thought maybe
possibly
it could be about
me
not for long maybe a minute or two
just to catch you up on what i’ve been going through but if i do all you’d say was
oh
maybe laugh. maybe that sucks but always
right back to you
so i try a different way
then maybe you’ll get it maybe you’ll see
but then i get a call saying
stop being rude to me
what your problem, gee
the question i longed for so close, yet unreachable all at once
so i bury it down
yet again
to spare you any burden
bc god forbid you feel an emotion thats not yours
god forbid I actually have feelings
god forbid it takes an ounce of attention away from your little “problems”
god forbid i do something slightly out of character or even
dare i say
feel?
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Metre | 1011111110 010110011101 11 1 0111111111111 10111 101101010 111110 100 11101 1 1111001011 11111111110111111111 1 101101111 1111 11101001 1101111011 11110110 110111 11101 0101111110100111 111011 101 1111010 1101111010111 1011100110 1011111101001111010 10111101011100110 111 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 971 |
Words | 200 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 31 |
Lines Amount | 31 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 729 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 192 |
About this poem
This poem is about a person who i think is my friend but hasn’t really been acting like it recently
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Written on November 08, 2022
Submitted on November 08, 2022
Modified on May 01, 2023
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