Analysis of A lonely room



I sit alone watching as the clouds go by waiting for a answer to fall from the sky does anybody love me does anybody care I rather be alone  right now to say my final prayers if what I'm seeking is far to great no one will understand my very fate someday I know we will meet again when I am not broken and
 when love fills my heart and I am able to bare the world in front of me filled with fear and hate I pray love is good to you for the remainder of your years fly free don't be like me in this lonely room trapped like a bird with no wings


Scheme AB
Poetic Form
Metre 1101101011110101011101110001111000111010111111101111101111111011101111111011111100 11111011101101011111101111111110010111111111011011101111
Characters 544
Words 117
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 2
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 212
Words per line (avg) 59
Letters per stanza (avg) 424
Words per stanza (avg) 117

About this poem

A poem I wrote when I was young but added some extra things to it

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Written on November 07, 2022

Submitted by lawsabra_b on November 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lawsabra Belser

I love writing poems as well as music and I love to sing I am a married woman of 3 years but we have been together 14 years we sadly just lost our cat snuggles of 14 years but I have another cat treasure I have had for 2 years she's adorable and keeps me preoccupied we have no kids yet so in the meantime I write more…

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