Analysis of Payton Hayes
Loving you is all I want. Laying on your chest
with a shaky softness. The way your electricity collides with my skin. Your hands, gently exploring. Your breath comes across my back. Lovely are your words, finding their way to my lips. Your body pressing against
mine. Curving your shoulder, slightly. Your fingertips brushing around my waist, like waves washing over me. The feeling of your teeth soft against my neck Tonight we're a sea, your rocky rhythm taking me down,
deeper. Arching my back to meet your moves. My bare skin singing for your warmth. And you savor my thighs. Gentle are intentions. You trace your tongue along my hips, planting flowers with your lips. Gripping cold silk, your breath comes
hot against my neck.
My mind pulses with
the thrilling thought of you
rolling over in
infinity. Skipping a beat, your
gives in. Leaving fingerprints on our skin like beestings, and
I have never known a love
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Metre | 101111110111 101010011010001111111001011101111011110111111101001 1101101011010011111101010101111011101101110101011 1010111111111101110110111010101111011110101111011111 10111 11101 010111 10100 010010011 1010101101110 1110101 |
Characters | 1,442 |
Words | 220 |
Sentences | 19 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 11 |
Letters per line (avg) | 66 |
Words per line (avg) | 18 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 66 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 18 |
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Written on 2016
Submitted by lifeasalyric on November 04, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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