Analysis of Payton Hayes



Loving you is all I want. Laying on your       chest

with a shaky softness. The way your electricity collides         with my skin. Your hands,     gently    exploring.  Your breath comes across my back. Lovely are     your words, finding their way to                 my               lips. Your body pressing against

mine. Curving your shoulder,   slightly.  Your fingertips brushing            around my waist, like waves       washing      over     me. The feeling of your teeth      soft against       my neck Tonight we're a sea,          your rocky rhythm       taking        me down,

deeper.   Arching my back to        meet your moves. My     bare      skin singing for       your warmth. And you savor my     thighs. Gentle are intentions. You               trace your tongue       along my hips,                planting flowers with your lips.  Gripping      cold silk, your     breath comes

hot against          my neck.

My mind pulses with

the thrilling thought of you

rolling   over in

infinity.  Skipping        a beat, your

gives in.  Leaving       fingerprints       on our      skin                  like              beestings, and

I have never known a love


Scheme X X X X X X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 101111110111 101010011010001111111001011101111011110111111101001 1101101011010011111101010101111011101101110101011 1010111111111101110110111010101111011110101111011111 10111 11101 010111 10100 010010011 1010101101110 1110101
Characters 1,442
Words 220
Sentences 19
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 66
Words per line (avg) 18
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Written on 2016

Submitted by lifeasalyric on November 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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