Analysis of Does the pain just melt away



Does the pain just melt away,
when all your bruises fade,
or do the thoughts and dreams that stay,
still haunt you in the shade?

Does the pain just melt away,
when all your scars have gone,
or does it linger every day,
while months and years drag on?

What can wash away your pain?
For still you bear the marks.
The wounds have healed but scars remain,
carved deep within your heart.

Does the pain just melt away....


Scheme Abab Axax cxcx A
Poetic Form
Metre 1011101 111101 11010111 111001 1011101 111111 111101001 110111 1110111 111101 01111101 110111 1011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 418
Words 94
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

Written during a time in my life when I battled thoughts. I hope others can relate.

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Submitted by JD.Mags on November 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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J.D. Mags

I spent seven years as a photojournalist. I spend much of my time writing poems, listening to music and thinking about life. I have traveled to numerous countries around the world and realized that people everywhere are the same. more…

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