Analysis of Whet

Roberto Suárez Torres 1983 (New York)



Quick roil strong winds, plump rain, or sudden snow;
bellows like a bull's flicked tongue in and out,
plumes of this smoke steal what little lights sprout
powerless in a sole breath lying low.

Rambling vagabonds, by land or by sea
pitch black is the night that to us has spun...
on sands that drip flame hotter than the sun,
thereof stranded oars of the thickest tree.

Alive and whetted do none hear the screams,
for still are halls in a mansion of pain;
oh, but how wide does the gate bid downstream,

like the wings open and firm of doves fain
in their nest deaf, to what the oscine stream
when they yearn for which of rind yet might grain.


Scheme ABBA CDDC XEF EFE
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111101 1010111001 1111111011 1000011101 1010011111 1110111111 1111110101 110110101 0101011101 1111001011 1111101111 1011001111 011111011 1111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 644
Words 133
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Written on October 21, 2022

Submitted by robertrad2021 on October 21, 2022

Modified by robertrad2021 on September 15, 2023

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