Analysis of Without you

Riya Rajput 2004 (Delhi)



Mom, without you, there would be no me.
Your love, your attention, your guidance,
have made me who I am.
Without you, I would be lost,
wandering aimlessly,
without direction or purpose.
You showed me the way
to serve, to accomplish, to persevere.
Without you, there would be an empty space
I could never fill, no matter how I tried.
Instead, because of you,
I have joy, contentment, satisfaction and peace.
Thank you, mom.
I have always loved you
and I always will.


Scheme ABCDAEFGHIJKLJM
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 101111111 111010110 111111 0111111 100100 01010110 11101 1110101001 0111111101 11101110111 010111 11101001001 111 11111 0111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 478
Words 97
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 358
Words per stanza (avg) 83

About this poem

This poem refer to mother ... she is the only one in this entire world to live us.. without any reasons yes she is rude or hard in outside but she is soft inside and she always loves their children . For their children she is face many sacrifices and etc so this poem dedicated to mom (powerful and strong women)

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Written on September 28, 2022

Submitted by Riyarajput6762 on September 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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