Analysis of One day the moon will melt



One day the moon will melt.
1. One day the moon will melt.
Like the ice that is out of the freezer
And it will become on the earth
Meet together earth and his beauty
And express his all feeling
Which he faced in space,
One day the moon will melt........2

2. One day the moon will melt.
just like the candle that is burning
and each drop of wax
will become on the earth
as a raining form
and share about his burning pain
how he used to burn himself
to light for the people,
and no one asks him about her feelings there,
One day the moon will melt..........2

3. One day the moon will melt.
just like a piece of iron
that is continued heating by the sun
and one day it becomes on the earth
in liquid form
and meet earth with together her beauty
as a mountain, rock, sea, river and so all
and express his loneliness feeling
how he alone survive in space
a continue saw her beauty the whole night,
One day the moon will melt......2

4. One day the moon will melt.
just like sugar that is out of the box,
which continues fage in his melting,
and it will one day become on the earth
and explain with sorrow about his sweetness,
how usually he touched her beauty with his eye
and want to touch her beauty with his hand.
One day the moon will melt......2

5. One day the moon will melt.
just like butter that is out of the freezer,
 it continues to decrease
its structure after fifteen days.
that is the day he feels so tiny
and has a fifteen lakh km distance
and is compelled to not meet,
and every day he usually hearted,
when becoming a day.
all pain he will explain in detail.
One day the moon will melt........2


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,629
Words 363
Sentences 21
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 10, 11, 8, 11
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 245
Words per stanza (avg) 63

About this poem

regarding the moon who lives in the space of loneliness. no anyone is there to share his problems.

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Written on September 24, 2022

Submitted by nkguptaroyal on September 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Naveen Gupta

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