Analysis of My eyes



It was sunday
I looked out the window and saw
The high hill in front of me
was covered by clouds
As if looking down from the top of that hill
Only fog would be visible

At that time i considered
myself very lucky that i got a chance
to live in these forests , rivers
away from greed , quarrels , theft

And at night,
the view looks even more pleasing,
when sitting on the lake
in the middle of the forest,
watching the shadow of the
moon and stars in it feels
like I've come to a another world

but then it feels bad to even think
don't know when all this
Will just seem like a dream
Coming kids - jungles , rivers , lakes
will read them in books only
don't know whether
they will ever understand its
real meaning or not


Scheme XXAXXX XXXX XXXXXXX XXXXAXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111 11101001 0110111 11011 11101101111 10111100 1111010 1101011101 11011010 0111101 011 01110110 110101 00101010 100110 101011 111100101 111111101 11111 111101 10110101 1110110 1110 1110011 11011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 738
Words 163
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 7, 8
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 37

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life of indias small village

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Written on September 25, 2022

Submitted by sapna01518 on September 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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