Analysis of My country my country

Eric Uren Aimufua 1991 (Ologbo, Edo state)



My country my country
The land of my fathers
A land filled with milk and honey
With abundance to share to friends and even to enemies
A land with an overflow for lending, yet live at the mercy of hunger and poverty

My country my country
The land of my mothers
A land where most resources abound, yet go about seeking the help of the less endowed
The land with enough breed of intellectuals
Yet being govern by those who are of no intellectual substance
A land where the supposed protectors of the county’s territorial integrity are seen molesting it’s own citizens
Yet still claim to be the most discipline

My country my country
The land where our fathers and mothers queue up and even die while waiting for their pension, yet our politicians receive their pay without tension
The land where all the laws you could think of exist, yet the ones to implement, lack the right habit to exhibit
A land that poses itself as a giant, yet unable to stand before mere little ants just because they nickname themselves as militants

My country my country
The land where you steal thousands, you are promoted
You steal millions, you are celebrated
You steal billions, and then you find yourself at the helm of political affairs
Deciding who gets what, when and how
Not minding the priority on ground

I cry for my country
O yes I cry
I cry for the generations already born
For they are like children without father of their own to call on when the day is dawn
I cry for the generations yet unborn, for same fate awaits them to come if nothing new is done.

ERIC URENMIMOREN AIMUFUA


Scheme Abaxa Abxxxxc Acxx Addxxx axxxc x
Poetic Form
Metre 110110 011110 01111010 101011110101100 0111101101110101100100 110110 011110 0111100011101100110101 01101110100 11010111111010010 011001010101010001001101011100 1111101100 110110 0111010010110101110111011001001110110 0111011111011011100101101010 0111001101010101101110110111011100 110110 011111011010 111011100 11100111011011010001 10111101 1100010011 111110 1111 11100100101 111110011011111110111 111001011111101111110111 1011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,592
Words 307
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 7, 4, 6, 5, 1
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 211
Words per stanza (avg) 48

About this poem

It narrates the ordeal of the Nigeria state. How it rose from being a giant to being reduce to nothing as a result of bad leadership

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Submitted by aimufuaeric2020 on September 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Eric Uren Aimufua

Eric Uren Aimufua is a native of itsekiri from Edo state. A second class upper division graduate of political science and public administration from the university of Benin, Benin city, Edo state, Nigeria. His a Christian by religion and an great observer of the happenings of the society. more…

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