Analysis of In My Mind



As I sit in my room I tend to think
Think about the struggles blink by blink
Knowing that in my heart I’m strong
But through the eyesight of others I’m weak
My strength is far more unique then the mind of those punished by the movement of my feet can see
Believe
Believe what you want about me cause on the run is me when running it up is apart of whom I tend to be
Me Rome someone designed to help those see way more through the sound of my voice can speak
Do you see me now
Now hear the vision behind my words and let it guide you through time knowing a god has his hands wrapped around apart of me
The part of me that can Breathe when feeling breathless isn’t what is to be seen
Focus on my words for tho will protect you
On this here earth as well as the one underneath could reach
I sing because I’m happy
Happy that I’m able to be just that happy with life and the love of my love one’s surrounding me isn’t at all hard to believe
When catching up isn’t hard to reach
Scream hoping to be heard not ignored and sleep
I am me a god and a god is me
Woken up from a dream that is deep
Scary but also a sign of relief I speak only to ask who’s really listening
Does it matter if those people listen at all
No cause listening to the wrong is where we fall
Get up and grow
Ball


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110111111 101010111 10101111 110111011 11111011011110101011111 01 0111101111011111011101111111 1110111111110111111 11111 110100111011111110011111010111 011111111010111111 10111111011 1111111010111 1101110 10111011111011001111101011111101 11011111 11011110101 1110100111 101101111 1011001101111011110100 111011101011 111001011111 1101 1
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,313
Words 284
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,002
Words per stanza (avg) 266

About this poem

This poem is inspirational giving you substance and the energy to continue being great at what ever it is god has set out for you to do

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Written on August 28, 2022

Submitted by RomyRome614 on September 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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