Analysis of Destiny of Sunset and Moon



I remember those nights I listened to you,
It always made my heart burst
But you couldn't see the way I feel into
And it made my feelings thirst.

You are the moon that lights me up when I am in the dark,
The moon is beautiful tonight isn't it?
I always said that and smirk
Closing my eyes, feel your light.

I am the sunset and you are the moon,
We are destined to be close but not to meet
After I go down, you go up, That is our faith
We will never hook upon.

Sunrise is always there, giving us hope,
But instead of hope, it is acceptance.
The fact that my feelings will never reach you
And it breaks me in an instance.

We will never be together,
You are the light and I am the dark.
We are not compatible,
But destined to be close apart.


Scheme ABAB CXXX XXXX XDAD XCXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 10101111011 111111 11101011101 0111101 11011111111001 01110001101 111101 1011111 110101101 11101111111 1011111111101 1110101 11111011 1011111010 01111011011 01110110 11101010 110101101 1110100 11011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 743
Words 169
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

It's all about how to accept our destiny on someone whether it is bad or good.

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Submitted by cabraljohnpaul9 on September 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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