Analysis of Days without you are monotonous



Life turned it's back on me
Things begun to crumble
Feelings started getting numb
Emotionally I am now unavailable
I am disconnected to my being
Ticks are sucking my blood day and night
I am unable to move myself
I transfigured to the worst
My setting now have blurry pictures
Everything looks so vivid and lifeless
Where is everyone?
Millions of friends I have but lonely I am
It was now that I realised
My sun was long gone!


Scheme ABCBDEFGHIJKEL
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 101110 1010101 01001110100 110101110 111011101 11010111 11101 110111010 101110010 1110 10111111011 111111 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 432
Words 86
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 345
Words per stanza (avg) 79

About this poem

The poem tells my story when the world was against me,I was struggling friends and family turned their backs on me.

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Written on June 23, 2022

Submitted by netshithuthunimillicent9 on September 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Millicent Netshithuthuni

I am an African Venda girl but currently located in Gauteng.I am studying but every time I get a chance I pour out my heart in a piece of paper through writing poems. more…

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