Analysis of Thee ice glaze



Thee ice glaze’

The world is weeping out there .
You came with grin and left misery.
They thought you’re a helper not knowing you’re a vandal .
Everybody is wailing because of your dirtiness.
Thee beauty that is full of evil.

Oh no! It is true that  the beauty of figs is worms.
Colourless in colour that leave them hopeless.
A wolf in sheep’s clothing that leave them homeless.
Aphasia and loss of weight are results when you arrive.
A good heart turns into bad one.

Success turns into failure when you’re present.
Schizophrenia is all over the world because of you.
Thee glazing ice that melts and create tears .
Thee glare ice holding pain and tears.
You stole their happiness with a false smile.

Trust became trauma when you have arrived in their lives.
The root of evil is what you are !


Scheme A XXBAB XCCXX XXDDX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 111 0111011 111101100 1110101101010 10011001111 110111110 1111110101111 10111110 01011011110 01001111011101 01110111 01101101110 01001110010111 1101110011 11110101 1111001011 1011011101011 011101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 806
Words 162
Sentences 18
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 5, 5, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 125
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

The poem is about the drug known as crystal methane and how it destroyed our youth in the world .

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Submitted by mpanaamahle1 on September 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Amahle Mpana

A 21 one years old girl who live in Mthatha . When she wrote this poem , she was studying her second year in Bachelor of arts at Nelson Mandela University located in Port Elizabeth. She wrote this poem because when she saw the youth being destroyed by this drug , she felt the pain so she decided to take a pen and a paper and write her pain . more…

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