Analysis of Hotel room( original by points north)
I can't breathe now, yeah I'm fucked though,
Rolling my dice, I had to let go.
Finding space in my crowded mind, Holding strong to what i know now
(bridge)-
And its hard to die this hard
I'm afraid of what you'll convict me for
Even though I know it wasn't our fault
I can never seem to get that far
Bridge-
All these voices
Bars, lines, lyrics
The worst part's over
But I'm still (broken)
'Cause now my heart feels like a cheap hotel room!
(rent me out, let myself down, wish i could get that far, i hate saying that part)
And if I ever wake up, I know ill be scared until noon
Blood on the dance floor, Are you out there? (everywhere)
I never got a chance to see whats out there.
I connect dots on a dandelion ceiling.
Waiting on Sharpest of cuts to come and find me, before I do.
Spending my time in the Tree house
Holding strong to my love now,
I'll keep you entertained with my dark thoughts
100 000 words for a soft spot
And I'm afraid of reliving this part
I'm afraid of what you'll convict me for
Even thought I know it wasn't our fault
I can't ever seam to get that far
All these voices
Bars, lines, Verses
The worst part's not quit over
But I'm still (healing)
'Cause now my heart feels like a cheap hotel room
(rent me out, let myself down, wish i could get that far, i hate saying that part)
And if I ever wake up, I know ill be scared till noon.
Blood on the dance floor, Are you out there? {your everywhere}
I never got a chance to see the sky above me.
I connect dots on a dandelion ceiling
Waiting on Silence to come and find me, before I do.
(the sharpest of cuts , ill keep you entertained with my thoughts.)
interlude-
All these voices
(broken hearts not beating)
Bars, lines, Verses
(can we clear this)
The worst part's not quit over
(THE HURRICANE FROZEN OVER)
But I'm still (Growing),IM STILL HEALING
'Cause now my heart feels like a cheap hotel room
(rent me out for a night, checkouts at noon)
And if I ever wake up, I know ill be scared till noon.
Blood on the dance floor, Are you out there?(Everywhere)
I never got a chance to see the sky that's out there.
I connect dots on a dandelion ceiling
Waiting on Silence to come and find me, before I do.
(the sharpest of cuts , ill keep you entertained with my thoughts.)
Interlude out-
(-you are numb (Her)
-what?- how can you say that?(Him)
-no, I'm serious, you feel nothing, You aren't here, come back to me love.
-I cant do this on my own(Her)
What?
I've always been here (him)
is that so because?life is about to come find me.(Her)
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111111 101111111 1010110110111111 1 0111111 1011111011 10111110101 111011111 1 1110 1110 01110 11110 11111101011 111111111111111011 011101111111011 11011111110 11010111011 10111010010 1011011110110111 10110011 1011111 111011111 11011 0101101011 1011111011 10111110101 111011111 1110 1110 0111110 11110 11111101011 111111111111111011 01110111111111 110111111110 1101011101011 10111010010 10110110110111 0101111101111 10 1110 101110 1110 1111 0111110 0101010 111101110 11111101011 111101111 01110111111111 11011111110 1101011101111 10111010010 10110110110111 0101111101111 101 1110 1111111 111001110110111111 11111110 1 11111 111110111110 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 2,515 |
Words | 509 |
Sentences | 23 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 64 |
Lines Amount | 64 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,893 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 491 |
About this poem
Being alone at home in my room. with thoughts all around.
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Written on September 12, 2022
Submitted by Sholnyshko42 on September 12, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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