Analysis of Wo purane din....



Wo purane din....
Jab sbko bhut pyari thi mai,
Papa ki LAADLI..Maa ki DULARI thi mai.
Maa ka Pyaar Se Mujhko god me bitana,
Bin mere Papa ka khane ka ek niwala tk na khana.
Kitna sukoon deta tha mera ek jhalak sbko,
Ghr kya...Gaw,mohalle me bhi apne charche the,
Par kise pta...ki ab ye sirf bite hue lamhon ke parche the.
HEERE sa sundar man ho jiska,
Wo HEERAMAN naam mera,,
Papa ke heeraman kehte hi sb Kaam Chhod daud jana mera.
Bhut naaz tha sbko mujh pr ,sbke bde Armaan the,
Sbne bhut chaha mjhe,sbke bde EHSAAN the.
Ghr me sbse chhoti mai,sbki thi dulari mai,
Isiliye Maa-Papa,didi,bhaiya sbki thi pyaari mai.
Woqt badla,halaat badle,badal gyi sab soch..
Kehne ko bs log na badle,badal gyi har soch..
Kya kahu? Kya bolu? Kisse kahu ye vyatha meri??
Jab samjhta koi nhi,fir kaisi ye katha meri????kehne ko to bhut hai....pr kambakht kalam hi ghabra rahi,
Mere in jajbaton ko..panne pr likhne se katra rahi........@s


Scheme ABBAACDDCEEDDBBFFEGH
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111111 10111111 11111111 111011111111 11111111 1111110 111111111110 1110111 1111 1011111111101 1111111110 1111110 11111111 1111111 111111 111111111 111111111 111111101111111111 1011111111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 922
Words 199
Sentences 20
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 693
Words per stanza (avg) 164

About this poem

Based on Real life experiences

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Written on August 03, 2022

Submitted by Shwetapandey305 on August 03, 2022

Modified on March 08, 2023

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Shweta pandey

Vill-patkhauli, post-fazilnagar, Dist-kushinagar U.p. pin no.274401 more…

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