Analysis of Waqt or kismat



                Waqt or kismat

Maine waqt or kismat dono ko badalte dekha hai....(2)
Jinke godh par pal kar maine khud ko dekha aaj apne godh me unhe dekha hai maine...
Jinko bin kahe meri har baat ka pata chal jata aaj unki isharo ko khamoshi se samajhta dekha hai maine....
Dard me chipe us kono ko badalte dekha hai.....
Maine waqt or kismat dono ko badalte dekha hai....

Koi saal na gujra ho aisa jab koi khushiya ya gham dono ko na dekha hai maine...
Aanshu or hasi logo ke chehre par badalte dekha hai maine.....
Koi kehkar baatt leta hai apne dard yaha....
To kisi ko sehkar chhupa lena dekha hai maine....
Jhut or sacchai dono ko badalte dekha hai...
Maine waqt or kismat dono ko badalte dekha hai.....

Har mahine mausam ko badalta dekha hai...
Hawao ke rukh ko dishao me badalte dekha hai...
Logo ko tez dhoop, Barsaat aur thand me mehnat karke apne ghar ki jarurat pura karte dekha hai maine....
Apno ki khaatir logo ko badalte dekha hai....
Maine waqt or kismat dono ko badalte dekha hai......

Umeedo se jyada umeed lagaye logo ko aksar thokar khate dekha hai....
Farq pada hai har baato se tut kar bhi unhe majbooti se judte dekha hai...
Girane wale bhi dekhe or girte hue ko uthane wale ko bhi dekha hai.....
Iman bechkar logo ko humne kitno ko chalte hai.....
Maine waqt or kismat dono ko badalte dekha hai.....(2)

By -
Ankiit Keshri.


Scheme x AbbaA bbabaA aabaA aaaaA xx
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111111111 11111111111111111 11111111111111111111 1111101111 111111111 1111101011111111111 111101111111 111101111 1111110111 11111111 111111111 1111111 111111111 101111111111111101111 111101111 111111111 1111110111111 111111111111111 11111111111111 10110111111 111111111 1 11
Characters 1,354
Words 270
Sentences 22
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 6, 5, 5, 2
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 166
Words per stanza (avg) 41

About this poem

Based on human nature and their deeds.

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Submitted by Akankitkeshri90 on August 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Waqt or kismat

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