Analysis of Sky

Samyak Chalise 2005 (Chitwan)



You can see high
Where countless birds fly
Blue or white in colour
Where also clouds bubbler

You cannot measure its leak
Neither can you find its peak
Can be enjoyed with deep keen
Which is larger than you imagine

Hide and sick of stars, moon and sun
Fly the planes with the imagined fun
Day and night, light and dark
Clouds enjoy hiding the larks

Alarm from lightning
Fear from rumbling
Downing raindrops
Blossom human crops

It makes me think and expect
How large is sky, how high to respect
So is the mind humans have to fly
I wish my heart as large as sky


Scheme AABB CCXD DDXX EEFF GGAA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Etheree  (45%)
Metre 1111 11011 11101 11011 1101011 1011111 1101111 111011010 10111101 101100101 101101 1011001 01110 11100 101 10101 1111001 111111101 110110111 11111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 564
Words 113
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

Sky is the poem that describes about the natural beauty I have felt around. I wrote this poem when I was 15 years old so it has an emotional caress on my writing journey. The poem defines the care of nature and the care for nature to some large extent.

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Written on January 10, 2020

Submitted by samyakkumarchalise on August 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Samyak Chalise

I am a student at Step By Step School located in Chitwan,Nepal., I am fond of writing poems and participate in contests. more…

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