Analysis of MY LIFE: A MESS

Ariana Gold 2007 (Mumbai)



I hate my life
Wished I was dead
No one ever loved me, No one ever cared

I was alone in my room, crying and stressed
Thinking about, from others what made me less
I myself didn't know I was depressed
Kept my hopes high even when I was a mess
Was my birth a mistake?
This thought gave me a heartache

I hate my life
Wished I was dead
No one ever loved me, No one ever cared

Rejected by my crush, I was gloomed and distressed
Nothing in my life ever made me feel blessed
My parents hated the way I dressed
This made me even more depressed
Did only their feelings matter?
Don't I have a life to live for myself?

I hate my life
Wished I was dead
No one will ever love me, No one will ever care


Scheme ABC dedeff ABC ddddxx ABx
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1111 11101111101 11010111001 10011101111 111011101 11111011101 111001 111101 1111 1111 11101111101 010111111001 10011101111 110100111 11110101 11011010 111011111 1111 1111 1111011111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 692
Words 150
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 6, 3, 6, 3
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on August 28, 2022

Submitted by rosiesofrubies on August 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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