Analysis of MPD

Jerome Martin 1984 (kingston)



MPD.
Two fazed, two rows, two columns.
one faze you seemed ok full of luv intentions heightens, we kissed and love synchronized.
 Moments of your shadowy past, lurks, the mist that you never see through to see me.
two fazed, your awfully hurting words, trying to pierce my minds karma, wanting to watch my world fall apart, so you can pickup the pieces.
I running back to drama, sadness, and for ever pain.
I tried living in both worlds but my body, i cannot separate from my spirit, so I kept synchronized
but your too fazed, your two rows, now became two columns, solid. no emotions, no, respects, no luv, no morals, because your too rows, two columns, trying to live two lives.


Scheme ABACDEAF
Poetic Form
Metre 1 1111110 11111111101010110110 10111001101111011111 11110101101111101011111011111010 11011101001101 1110011111011010111011110 11111111011101010101011111001111110101111
Characters 680
Words 129
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 66
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 526
Words per stanza (avg) 123

About this poem

its sort of a reflection of my life.

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Written on August 23, 2022

Submitted by jdiannejdionne on August 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jerome Martin

am 38, yrs. D.O.B 12/08/1984 am a welder and fabricator for china harbor engineers, for the passed six years, am both introvert and extravert. more…

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