Analysis of Me and dawgs

Victor Richard 2000 (Port Harcourt)



ME AND MY DAWGS

Dragging the toxic air into my respiratory system,  then I make a puff with few parts of my misery blown away with it.

This nicötine product is over hyped, it only guarantee's you temporary inner peace.

Reason why me and my dawgs keeps running back to it everyday, we're still craving for that feeling you know?

We sited just behind the river, it's been 2hours here already and right after then uveitis takes place. Trust me you don't want to look into our eyes cause we look like people suffering from conjunctivitis.

Its time to go now, so we unhurriedly walk through the parts that leads to our various homes. Though some parts seems so mountainous and if there is an alternative, we just make a gamble.

It's either we climb through something that looks like mountain in our eyes or we just fall off while trying.

I always stop at my friend's house before going to mine just to rub some essential oil on my body to kill the smell of the nicötine. You probably gonna mistake his house for a perfumery outlet cause there are all kinds of scents there.


Scheme A X A X A X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 100101011100010111011111110010111 111101101110011100101 10110111101111011110111011 110101010111010100110111111111110110111111010011 11111111110111110100111111100011110100111010 1101111011110010111111110 1111111011011111101011110110110111100100111101111111111
Characters 1,080
Words 209
Sentences 10
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 106
Words per line (avg) 25
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 25

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Written on July 23, 2022

Submitted by victorrichard070 on August 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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