Analysis of COLLISION

Sthembiso 1996 (Sundumbili Hospital)



COLLISION
CONNECTION AS COLLECTIVE,
WE COLLIDED, LIKE CARS
WE DRIVEN US,
WE STAND LIKE STRAIDS,
WITH DNA CODED IN US,
WE ARE COLLISION,

LIKE METAPHORIC OF A STORY,
WE BEGAN WITH HANDS ON HANDS,
LOVE ON LOVE, CARE ON CARE,
SPEAR ON HEART,
SPILL MY BLOOD LOVER,
AS I WILL DIE ON YOUR HAND,
I HOLD THAT MEMORY BEFORE
COLLISION,

OUR LIFE IS BIAS,
AS TO OUR SOULS, WE ARE UNBIAS,
I BUILD EACH LIE AS I SPEAK,
AS YOU CONNECT A LOST CONNECTION,
I FIND COURAGE AND SPACE
TO DRIFT AWAY LIKE WIND,
LIKE CLOUDS I WILL ALWAYS COMEBACK,
COLLISION MULTIPLE.


Scheme Axbcbca xxxxxxxA cbxaxxxx
Poetic Form
Metre 010 0101010 101011 1101 1111 1111001 11010 111010 1011111 111111 111 11110 1111111 11110001 010 101110 11101111 1111111 110101010 111001 110111 111111 010100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 546
Words 123
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 8, 8
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

It written under the influence of love

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Written on July 17, 2022

Submitted by Vow@ on August 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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