Analysis of A bunch of hatred leaves behind



A bunch of hatred leaves behind
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                                                                                                                                       Khurshid Alam

The writing pens seem to be stagnant
Have fallen

Some memories of the old days
When I remember--
Favorite pens are companions of loneliness
Unknown octopus-like sheets of paper
Hold on and stop.

When the pain inside the chest
Busy trying to build a permanent home-
Sometimes it feels like from the kitchen
Bring the curry knife
Bring out all the troubles.

Just the way a surgeon is
Kidney or gallbladder congestion
Bring out the stones!

If that is not possible
But by showing thumbs up to this enchanted life
I will tell God
To push up a little. And
A bunch of hatred leaves behind
Let's go to the other side.

Beyond the world
Too high.
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23/03/2022 AD


Scheme A x xb xcxcx xxbdx xbx xdxxAx xx x
Poetic Form
Metre 01110101 1 101 010111110 110 11001011 11010 100110101100 011011110 1101 1010101 10101101001 011111010 10101 111010 1010101 10110010 1101 1111100 111011110101 1111 1110100 01110101 1110101 0101 11 1 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 938
Words 140
Sentences 9
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 5, 5, 3, 6, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Written on March 23, 2022

Submitted by khurshid_a on August 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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