Analysis of When we lose someone



When we lose someone,
We know it's impossible to bring them back
We get to know their importance,
We even start to think that It was our lack.

When the one leaves us
There are a lot of regrets
Why did we leave so much "Let's"?
 When they lead their way to heaven,
 We start searching them in stars
 It's their memories that are still and will always be stuck behind the bars.

It's the feelings,
We miss their touch
 The thought that the one will never come, And that we couldn't do much
 Kills us inside, Makes us remember how many times we had lied.

The way of their they smile, their joy, tears Became an Inseparable part of our life, How they used to share all their fears
 All of it is in our head,
And it'll always be there

Regret is the punishment we all get for hurting them somehow,
 Loosing a life that was our soul
Makes us living like a living dead,
The leaves of one of the beautiful tree in our garden just shed.

A day will come when we'll be going through the autumn,
But till then, Who'll be the one to handle our tantrum?
It can be that we will find someone new But, what if we just want only you?
The brightest star settled too fast
 But what if we don't want to call you my past?

Hope you will be with us,
Even when we can't see
 In a world called parallel verse,
You will be here, right?
Hope, I'll get through this regretful curse.


Scheme ABXB CDDAEE XFFX XGX XXGG HHXII CXJXJ
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 11101001111 11111010 110111111101 10111 1101101 1111111 11111110 1110101 11100111011110101 1010 1111 0110111010111011 1101110101101111 011111111011010001110111111111 11110101 010111 011010011111011 100111101 111010101 01111010010101011 0111111101010 11111011101010 111111111111111101 01011011 11111111111 111111 101111 0011101 11111 111110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,375
Words 293
Sentences 10
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 4, 3, 4, 5, 5
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 148
Words per stanza (avg) 38

About this poem

It describes one's feelings of love and regret when someone who was very important in their life leaves them and moves to the heaven.

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Written on February 06, 2022

Submitted by Krystal_13 on July 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:31 min read
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Kritika Tyagi

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