Analysis of My man, my love



My man, my love

Charming prince,
Slow and Tenderheart you are
In the midst of too much love,
Yours is great
Blooming I have become,
And out of me nectar flows
Buzzing bees,
A clear indication of great taste
And bright petals for nourishment

Cheer me up with sweet love,
Big smile I ought to wear
Off the beat let's dance,
As fostering hearts slowly we turn
Because together forever,
And forever together we announce

Under your shadows I love to sit,
You who feed your flock among the lilies
And you restore my strength with raisins
The air is fragrant,
Because of your blossoming love
Promise me,
No one will interrupt our love
My man, my love.


Scheme A xxaxxxbxc axxxxx xbxcaxaA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 101 10111 0011111 111 101101 0111101 101 01010111 01101100 111111 111111 10111 110011011 01010010 0010010101 10111111 1111101010 010111110 01110 01111001 101 11101101 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 647
Words 131
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 9, 6, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

The feeling of being in love as a young teenager is intense. And as a teenager I fall in love with a young handsome man that makes me nourish more like a flower and I enjoy his company, Jim being a flock attendant.

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Written on July 10, 2020

Submitted by mariononerima on July 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Marion Nerima Oduory

Am a student at the Technical University of Kenya undertaking a bachelor's degree in medical laboratory science. I have been writing since my primary level of education and I enjoy writing poems. more…

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