Analysis of Alone

Retlile shaku 2008 (Ga-nchabeleng,Jane furse)



Millions of questions,
Runs through my mind,
Without no one beside,
Where in this universe,
Do I reside?
Without no one to care,
Without love ,to be spread,
Without happiness, lying there.

Darkness has covered me,
My heart is heavier,
Wish to scream and let it all
Still,
Wounds remains.

Suicide is the only option
Suicide is the only way
So shall I be relieved.


Scheme XXAXABXB XXXXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 1111 011101 10110 1101 011111 011111 01100101 101101 111100 1110111 1 101 10101010 1010101 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 372
Words 82
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 5, 3
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

It's regarding loneliness And less happiness felt

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Written on March 17, 2022

Submitted by Retlile on July 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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