Analysis of ACHES OF EMOTION



Loosing courage to the fullest of heart
zest is numbed afar
her with her deadliest enemy
living a life full of agony

why people being so fake everytime !
giving them accord is her cherishful dream
but they enigmate her with a combo of fakeness alive..

voids inside her needs to be filled
cries inside her needs to be heard
procession say "have she lost the status of her head''
she is just hoping to lift herself with a sacred thread

loneliness, disattachment two wheels of her life..
her tormented mind needs a pin(killer) for a while..

don't let her go off her being
being subserveint was a burden wheel
being curious for life is her new high..
HELP HER FLY!!1


Scheme XXAA XXX XXBB XX XXCC
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101011 11101 010100100 100111100 110101110 101011011 11101011101 10101111 10101111 0101111010101 11110110110101 100111101 010110110101 11011010 10110101 10100111011 101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 672
Words 136
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 2, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

This is a poem which describes the better half characterivity of a girl who is broken down by every aspect of her circular life.. What she gave to others was munifiscense love and care but what she got was betrayal and outcastedness from others..

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Submitted by niyatimaheshwari278 on July 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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NIYATI MAHEHSWARI

I'm from ajmer rajasthan and i'm 14 years old and poetry is what i love when ought to write cause what i feel about poem is .. it's an abstract idea and what we as poets do is to get that abstractivity in a structure of concrete words.. thank you more…

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