Analysis of WATCH YOUR MOUTH PLEASE

Raven69 1969 (Lakeland)



You need to watch your mouth,
When you talk to me.
Your attitude,
And your tone of voice
I will not stand for it
And you will see.
I can be a bitch now,
Like I have been before.
You can not handle this,
Your ass will hit the floor.
No disrespect please,
I am asking nice
I do not disrespect you
And I will not ask twice.
I have came a long way,
Trying to change
My life around.
It is all in how you say things,
Do not act like a clown.
I try to let things go,
Because
It is not worth my time,
But in front of people
I can not turn a blind eye.
Blaming other's
For your mouthy ways,
I will be
The bigger person
And just walk away.
Negativity
Is everyone's choice,
Try positivity
And lower your voice.
Before I go
I will ask you again...
Watch Your Mouth Please!!!


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Poetic Form
Metre 111111 11111 110 01111 111111 0111 111011 111101 111101 111101 1011 11101 111011 011111 111011 1011 1101 11101111 111101 111111 01 111111 101110 1111011 1010 11101 111 01010 01101 0100 1101 11 01011 0111 111101 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 762
Words 179
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 36
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 577
Words per stanza (avg) 157

About this poem

This poem is about people that don't know how to talk to another person.

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Written on August 02, 2022

Submitted by Raven69 on August 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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