Analysis of Oxygen

Richard Groff 1957 (Pottstown, Pa.)



She had a tank of oxygen
She carried on her back
She smoked another cigarette
But had no heart attack

I guess that it was hardened
Like a stone that can’t be moved
I know she tried to kill herself
Butt, that I cannot prove

If you’ll look at the evidence
I think that you will find
The way that she was breathing
Caused her whole life to unwind


Scheme XAXA XXXX XBXB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 11011100 110101 1101001 111101 1111110 1011111 11111101 111101 11110100 111111 0111110 1011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 349
Words 71
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Written on February 02, 2016

Submitted by dawg4jesus on July 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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