Analysis of Ballad for Gloom

Ezra Pound 1885 (Hailey) – 1972 (Venice)



For God, our God is a gallant foe
That playeth behind the veil.

I have loved my God as a child at heart
That seeketh deep bosoms for rest,
I have loved my God as a maid to man—
But lo, this thing is best:

To love your God as a gallant foe that plays behind the veil;
To meet your God as the night winds meet beyond Arcturus' pale.

I have played with God for a woman,
I have staked with my God for truth,
I have lost to my God as a man, clear-eyed—
His dice be not of ruth.

For I am made as a naked blade,
But hear ye this thing in sooth:

Who loseth to God as man to man
Shall win at the turn of the game.
I have drawn my blade where the lightnings meet
But the ending is the same:
Who loseth to God as the sword blades lose
Shall win at the end of the game.

For God, our God is a gallant foe that playeth behind the veil.
Whom God deigns not to overthrow hath need of triple mail.


Scheme XA XBCB AA XDXD XD CEXEXE AA
Poetic Form
Metre 1110110101 110101 1111110111 111111 1111110111 111111 111110101110101 11111011101101 111111010 11111111 11111110111 111111 111110101 1111101 11111111 11101101 1111110101 1010101 111110111 11101101 1110110101110101 1111110111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 892
Words 191
Sentences 8
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 2, 4, 2, 6, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 16, 2023

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Ezra Pound

Ezra Weston Loomis Pound was an American expatriate poet and critic of the early modernist movement. more…

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