Analysis of Words That Have Vale



Today whispers' a wild shivering breath.

The unfortunate feeds the best fortunate.

In return a smile & the sound that beast us

is gasped to them.

As pattern, he does survive it.

Their overcrowded cage also feeds the beast.

El negro, faggot, they,

Words that have vale

The power to call us not by what it is

But how what we carry can be the beast.

Maneuvering clouds of shadows

Through the window,

a bed below.

What I fear is me feeding the beast.

here I am healing atleast.


Scheme X A X X X B X X X B X C C B A
Poetic Form Tetractys  (53%)
Metre 0110011001 00100101100 0010101111 1111 11011011 1100110101 110101 1111 01011111111 1111101101 0100111 1010 0101 111111001 111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 520
Words 123
Sentences 11
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 25
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

¹In simple terms, A Sound That Beast Us is called a SLUR. ²The word Vale means WORTH, in this case as in the poem, it meaning changes to VALUE. ³The word BEAST in the poem means 3 things, (1. Sound that beast us>> meaning sounds that make us evil 2. How what we carry can be the beast>>meaning how what we carry can be used against us 3. What I fear is me feeding the beast>>meaning what I fear is me feeding the enemy (someone doesn't like you/me). ⁴El Negro French for The Black. Inspired by Call Us What We Carry by Amanda Gorman 

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Written on October 07, 2022

Submitted by hapeydee2020 on July 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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