Analysis of My Heart a Safe Space



I love the music of a lecture next door-
The safety of dry feet,
In from the cold.
A shared bowl of popcorn,
A cranberry scone,
A legacy of dreams had and told.

When someone I love asks me how I’m feeling,
Or the chirp of am email
From an old childhood friend.
It brings joy to my heart,
A compliment to my art,
I’ll never need validation again.

I’m loved when my mother
Demands my attention.
Sacred Being,
I receive her smile gently.

The aroma of incense burning,
Safe within my boyfriend’s warm bedroom
His taste in art and literature,
His off-center, love-laced poetry,
His hands over mine protectively.

I am safe like a ground squirrel
In a hollow Douglas Fir,
I woke up in this space,
Trickling streams
Of unchartable grace.
Love does the work,
We chose the pace.


Scheme XXAXXA BXXCCX DXBE BXDEE XDFXFXF
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101011 010111 0101 01111 0101 010011101 1111111110 1011101 11111 111111 0100111 110101001 111110 011010 1010 1010110 001010110 1011111 110101000 111011100 111010100 11110110 0010101 111011 101 111 1101 1101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 792
Words 166
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 4, 5, 7
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

During a trip to the mountains, I found myself worrying, missing home, feeling afraid. This poem made me feel better.

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Written on June 16, 2022

Submitted by on June 23, 2022

Modified on April 01, 2023

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Katrina Klippstein

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