Analysis of More Than Grateful

Doug Haberman 1959 (Albuquerque, NM)



First the softness of the morning
Then the yellow light pours in
I roll over and I see you
With the sheet up to your chin
Song of sparrows carries to us
I reach out and stroke your hair
And my heartbeat says I’m feeling
More than grateful you are there

Noon on Sunday, you come running
In the ash tree there’s a nest
Little hatchling, beak wide open
So you force me to get dressed
As we eat lunch on the back porch
You compare the dogwood buds
To amethyst encasing emerald
Once again I fall in love

In the dark we face each other
Take a look back at the day
As we share these quiet moments
Fears and worries fall away
Once I hear your rhythmic breathing
I reach out and stroke your hair
And my heartbeat says I’m feeling
More than grateful you are there


Scheme abxbxCAC adxdxxxx xexeaCAC
Poetic Form
Metre 10101010 1010110 11100111 1011111 11101011 1110111 0111110 1110111 1111110 0011101 1011110 1111111 11111011 101011 1100110 1011101 00111110 1011101 11111010 1010101 11111010 1110111 0111110 1110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 761
Words 151
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 200
Words per stanza (avg) 50

About this poem

This poem celebrates a strong marriage.

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Written on February 02, 2021

Submitted by DougHaberman on June 09, 2022

Modified on April 09, 2023

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Doug Haberman

Retired high school humanities teacher who loves to write song lyrics. Now trying my hand at poetry writing. more…

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