Analysis of Grievance to God



God, skeptic about your creation
My neighbor trust your instinct
Four billion years of formation
I will be a ruthless critic

Your organic chemistry, a Picasso imagination
What ruined your masterpiece, a sad evolution
More complex the life, genes of nuclear from knife
My land, my money, they raped my Snow White

I doubt your emotions, for demonic creation
My blood freezes for third war of nations
They talk of peace,
Welcome to Marlboro Cancer Hospital

They talk to cease
Another bird extinct in tropical
My hypocritical words, won't stand in court
My trial stands, we prisoners all aboard
Your pilot sitcom, seem to lose audience

God, accept all my grievances... all my grievances.


Scheme AXAX AAXX AXBC BCXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 110011010 1101110 11011010 11101010 101010000100010 11011001010 110011110011 1111011111 1110101010010 1110111110 1111 1011001010 1111 0101010100 1010011101 11011100101 1101111100 1011110011100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 690
Words 121
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 5, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted by Gaurav_666 on June 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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