Analysis of An endless sunset
Only if I could peep into your soul in search of the vibe so strong,
Only if I could read what's that your amazing mind surrounds,
I want to understand how beautifully you frame it,
The mind full of curiosities and eyes full of wit.
I want to learn the art of glowing that your soul masters,
The art of making some gorgeously satisfying gestures, I would love to be the keen and attentive listener like you,
And how can one express thoughts as smooth as a dew.
That postures strong and confident is what binds me to,
Keeping positivity is what you always remind me through,
Through the cluster of thoughts, you bring me out, Creating those perfect moments throughout.
You create me like a ceramist’s perfect piece,
The pottery so flawless one could never try to cease, Healing all my cracks with serenity of your speech,
Just like the marine taking away the dusty sand from a beach.
Even though the beach being mesmerizing beautiful, The sea still clears it up like my tears doubtful,
The way you caress me is the way one touches a blooming lily,
And the thought of erasing all this quotes, me so silly.
Silly yes, because I ain’t whose existence is a statement enough,
It's hard to be you; perfect, aspiring and tough, Nostalgia is what’s hitting me in the face all again, Made me realize how happily this all began.
Looked love to me, but was a butterflies' lifecycle,
We prepared ourselves to break societies cubicle,
We grew and bloomed exquisitely inside out,
And I stayed in that shell without a doubt,
Days passed like our smiles did real often,
Faces so pale like leaves got rotten,
And one day I woke up to not having you,
The day my soul died, and my cocoon started it all new!
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Metre | 10111101110110111 101111111010101 111011100111 0111010001111 11110111011110 0111011100101111101001010011 011101111101 1101010011111 10111110111 10101111110101011001 1011101011 010011011101111011110100111 1100110010101101 101011010010001111111110 01101110111001010 00110101111110 10101111010101001 11111010100101010101001101111011001101 1111110101 101001110100100 1101100011 0110110101 1111011110 101111110 01111111101 01111010110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 1,725 |
Words | 340 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 26 |
Letters per line (avg) | 51 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 167 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 39 |
About this poem
This poem is all about a girl deeply fallen in love like 90's but with guy like gen z and all she experiences is a game for the guy that's why she ends up broken and beautiful yet empty
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Written on May 21, 2022
Submitted by vibhuti_p on June 12, 2022
Modified on April 22, 2023
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