Analysis of WHERE DID I GO WRONG
The choices we make
The trust we break
The emotions we shared, the promises that are not always kept
All proves that we are just human
I'm sitting broken and untidy, asking where did I go wrong?
Were my feelings too strong; that it overshadowed my inner being?
Where do I start from?
Is it another broken record?
A huge part of me is so connected to you
Those first kisses, open up a part of me that has been closed for so long
Now when you leave, it's all a start over for me
I may not have been the all perfect, but in my heart I have been ready to perfect my imperfections
I know I couldn't do it alone, that's why I asked for your hand, to stand and prove that not every male is the same man
Again, where did I go wrong?
I can't bear you being a total stranger in a life I chose to give you
I know a part of you want me too
So why are we doing this?
Ok, I take it all on me
Maybe I should be saying sorry, maybe I should be kneeling forever; if that's the punishment for what I do not know I did
But through it all; I want you know that it was the last love I had, that I let go over to you
I'm left with none
Please keep it; because it is genuine
Scheme | AABCDEFGHDIJKDHHLIMHCC |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01011 0111 001011010011111 11111110 1101000101011111 0110111101011010 11111 110101001 011111101011 111010101111111111 111111011011 1111101011011111101011010 111101101111111111011110011011 0111111 1111100101000111111 110111111 1111101 11111111 101111010101111001011010011111111 111111111110111111111011 1111 1110111100 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,151 |
Words | 249 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 22 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 40 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 881 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 243 |
About this poem
Written based on a breakup on a first day of Relationship I actually needed.
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Written on June 29, 2022
Submitted by SB_InK on June 29, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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