Analysis of It's a Mellow Vibe



It’s a mellowed out vibe
Cello playing in my ear drums
Strummin’ along my thoughts of chillaxin’
Saxin’ on a groove on my way home tonight
Underground vehicle moving at a rhythmic pace
Chasing traffic gliding smoothly
I’m feelin’ soothed
On this Thursday eve moon…
‘Cuz this is a piece of a peace that surpasses all understanding,
When you know He’s with you in companion
At all times
Wherever you go
In your life,
Rockin’ to Philippians 4:6-7,
It’s a heavenly, mellow vibe


Scheme ABCDEFGCHCIJKBA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 101011 10100111 1011111 1101111101 101001010101 10101010 111 11111 1110110110101010 1111110010 111 01011 011 111 10100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 499
Words 91
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 374
Words per stanza (avg) 83

About this poem

I wrote this on my way home from work last night while listening to jazz music. Then I had an epiphany as to why I was feeling this way, midway through the poem :)

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Written on June 23, 2022

Submitted by babbina on June 24, 2022

Modified on April 01, 2023

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Kari Michele Chrichlow

I'm from NYC and have a daughter who is a creative soul like me. I like to sing, write and rest in my spirituality. more…

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