Analysis of Eyes

Real Abdullah 1981 (Trishal)



Oh eyes!  
Very excellent eyes,
Hurt into my heart.
Oh eyes!
If you have no water,
I feel,
My heart has become desert.

Oh eyes! an Ocean,
Or a sky,
I can sink in it,
I can die.

I can fly
If you look on me
Keep eyes on my eyes,
I don’t feel bed  
I feel million of love bird
Singing In my heart.


Scheme AabAxxx xcxc cxaxxb
Poetic Form
Metre 11 101001 10111 11 111110 11 1110110 11110 101 11101 111 111 11111 11111 1111 1110111 10011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 302
Words 81
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 4, 6
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

One day i was in a health centre. A beautiful black gown covered girl come. Her eyes were open. For a moment i was in love for her eyes.

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Written on May 18, 2022

Submitted by Real_abdullah on May 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Real Abdullah

Real Abdullah is a free hand writer. Basically he writes poem. He borns at trishal,Mymensingh, Bangladesh . He has four books. He is also an editor a little Magazine of bangali literature. His profession is banking. more…

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