Analysis of Burden



Whether there is drowsiness in both body & conscience?                                                                                         Whether there is unrest in soul?                                                                                                                                  Whether there is confusion in mind?                                                                                                                        Whether there is hesitation in life?                                                                                                                                     Don’t Worry!

Life means numerous problems will be there                                                                                                                       In each gates of it, worries & sorrows will be there;                                                                                                    If our wishes are fulfilled, no need for god will be there;                                                                                                    If we think about past happenings, no peace will be there;                                                                                            

If problem comes, solution will be there;                                                                                                                              If there is a will power to face anything, until end peace will be there

Make the mind of poor & needy a palace                                                                                                                      Day & night, sing an epic & bring them vivace;                                                                                                                    Give tomorrow & future to god & seek solace;                                                                                                              Many people suffer worse than you, think of it & seek peace

Where life starts & where it ends, no one knows it                                                                                                          This is the path & this is the journey, no one knows it;                                                                                                        Path may change & Journey ends;                                                                                                                                               If one realizes it confusion ends;                                                                                                                                              If problem comes, facing & winning it is solution;                                                                                                     Hiding & escaping is of no use, you may have dissolution

If a story ends, it will never continue in god’s record book                                                                                                    If a story continues, it will never end in each human beings house

Whether there is drowsiness in both body & conscience?                                                                                         Whether there is unrest in soul?                                                                                                                                  Whether there is confusion in mind?                                                                                                                        Whether there is hesitation in life?                                                                                                                                     Don’t Worry!


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Sentences 10
Stanzas 7
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Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 141
Words per line (avg) 379
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This poem motivates those who have depression in life, reduce their burden

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Submitted by manj_anjaneya on May 13, 2022

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M.Manoj Kumar

I am M.Manoj Kumar. I am 32 years old. I am residing at Chennai. I have no brothers & sisters. I am the only son to my parents. I had graduated with B.Com degree in the year 2010 & MCA degree in the year 2013. I am currently working at ICMR(Indian Council of Medical research) Ayapakkam for 5 years & 9 months. I had joined this job on 19/09/2016. I am currently new to poetry writing. I am a ardent fan of poets Vaali & Kannadasan. I used to hear their poems & song lyrics frequently. At office, I used to expose my other talents like singing, dancing, speech & other extra-curricular activities more…

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