Analysis of BREATH FOR FUTURE



Oh, the light shines with great promise
As the new day arise and a new mission to be fulfilled,
As the new challenges to be overcame
And a new enthusiasm and energy to be filled in,

Oh, the new day rose to heights
With the breath of freedom and bright future,
With the wind of choice and responsibility laid upon
With the fire of belief and conviction,

Oh,the new promises of future in the realm,
Without lies and deception but with truth and transparency,
Without chaos and misunderstanding but with orderliness and peace
Without discord and division but with cooperation and unity,

Oh, the new breath for future
The new melody of liberty chant throughout the land
The new road of concord will be built, which we can journey together
As one country, as one nation, as one race.


Scheme XXXX XAXX XBXB AXAX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 10111110 101101001101101 10110011101 001010001001110 1011111 1011100110 10111000100101 10101010010 11100110001 011001011100100 01100001011100001 011000101100100100 1011110 01100110010101 0111111111110010 11101110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 784
Words 153
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 156
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

This is all about a yearn of a free and democratic country which now in the verge of returning to dictattorship

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Written on April 29, 2022

Submitted by sealtiel095 on May 10, 2022

Modified on March 07, 2023

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