Analysis of Factory Smokestacks At Dawn

Ernst Toller 1893 (Samotschin, Posen) – 1939 (New York City)



They chisel their force into the dawning sky.
They forge their steeled selves on the precipice.
They split through the fog like axes
so that each breath shatters around them.
Morning announces itself with purple laughter.
The sky floods deep blue.
They keep watch,
barbed and shaven and grey,
naked there and as lost
in the ether. God is born.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJ
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11011010101 1111110100 11101110 111110011 100100111010 01111 111 101001 101011 0010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 342
Words 62
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 275
Words per stanza (avg) 60
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ernst Toller

Ernst Toller was a German left-wing playwright, best known for his Expressionist plays. He served in 1919 for six days as President of the short-lived Bavarian Soviet Republic, after which he became the head of its army. He was imprisoned for five years for his part in the armed resistance by the Soviet Republic to the central government in Berlin. While in prison Toller wrote several plays which gained him international renown. They were performed in London and New York as well as Berlin. In the year 2000, several of his plays were published in an English translation. In 1933 Toller was exiled from Germany after the Nazis came to power. He did a lecture tour in 1936–1937 in the United States and Canada, settling in California for a while before going to New York. He joined other exiles there. Struggling financially and depressed at learning his brother and sister had been sent to a concentration camp in Germany, he committed suicide in May 1939. more…

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